Punny Money
If I won $50 I would spend $25 to buy something for my sister. And for myself I would spend $15 on magic cards. I would buy magic cards because I’m very interested in the game. For the last $10 I would probably save it to buy a drawing tablet because one of my friends and I have a channel where we animate and we have 22 subs and I want to make the channel better. In conclusion I spend half and save half for my sister. Although other people might do different things this is what I would do.
I like how you wrote what you would do for you and your sister. I think you should have put down examples on what to buy for your sister. I think you could have said more about why you wanted to get magic cards. I liked how you made your ending. You made your ending in your own way that shows that you care about you and your sister. You could have also ended with a question for the readers. Other than that you did good.
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